Tuesday, August 31, 2010
Lovin' the em dash--I just can't stop using it
Here's when it IS acceptable to use the em dash:
1) To indicate an abrupt change in thought. This can also include a parenthetical statement that needs to be set apart. The em dash is used here when you need more 'oomph' than a regular ole comma.
(e.g. One of the best ways to determine which em dashes to remove is--did somebody say chocolate?)
2) To indicate that a sentence is unfinished because the speaker has been interrupted.
(e.g. "If you think I'm just going to stand here, while you point that Taser at me--")
That's pretty much it. Me? My motto has been "Why use a comma when you can have the excitement of an em dash instead?" I haven't deleted all of them, but there was a serious em dash massacre in my house last week.
What about you? Anyone else have em dash love? Any other writing-related addictions you'd care to admit?
Monday, August 30, 2010
Contest Monday
Win a 20-page partial critique from uber-agent Suzie Townsend (among other cool prizes) over at Emilia Plater's blog. Find the deets there and contest ends Sept. 9th.
ARC giveaway over at Ellz Readz. Win Firelight, Torment, and/or Sleepless. Contest ends Sept. 5th.
Don't forget to enter your Halloween-inspired short story in Matt Cunningham's contest over at Literary Asylum.This one ends Oct. 15th.
Got a half-finished ms that you need to finish? Love the idea of NaNoWriMo but 50,000 is too many words or November is a bad month for you? Want to win TONS of awesome prizes? Then check out the Complete Your Draft 2010 contest! Write 25,000 words on your ms in the month of September and win prizes! Check out the link for all the info! Ends September 30th but sign up before September starts!
Also, in non-creepy contest news, Nicole Zoltack is celebrating reaching 100 Followers with a contest. The winner gets a 3-chapter critique! Enter by Sept. 15th.
Carolina Valdez Miller is having a huge ARC giveaway at her blog Carol's Prints. Win ARCs of Paranormalcy, Beautiful Darkness, Jane and more! Ends Sept. 6th.
Enter to win lots of great ARCs in Sara McClung's Saradise ARC Extravaganza! Nightshade, Beautiful Darkness are just some of the ARCs up for grabs! Ends Sept. 8th.
Feel free to add other contests in the comments and Happy Monday!
Friday, August 27, 2010
Friday Book Recommendation! And Stuff.
Hello!
Product Description
Against all odds, Katniss Everdeen has survived the Hunger Games twice. But now that she’s made it out of the bloody arena alive, she’s still not safe. The Capitol is angry. The Capitol wants revenge. Who do they think should pay for the unrest? Katniss. And what’s worse, President Snow has made it clear that no one else is safe either. Not Katniss’s family, not her friends, not the people of District 12. Powerful and haunting, this thrilling final installment of Suzanne Collins’s groundbreaking The Hunger Games trilogy promises to be one of the most talked about books of the year.
- Reading level: Young Adult
- Hardcover: 400 pages
- Publisher: Scholastic Press (August 24, 2010)
- Language: English
- ISBN-10: 0439023513
- ISBN-13: 978-0439023511
Thursday, August 26, 2010
Mockingjay Midnight Madness!
Wednesday, August 25, 2010
I Hate Spoilers
And now on to today's post. I got nothin'. I'm patiently waiting for the UPS man to bring my copy of MOCKINGJAY from Amazon. And trying to avoid all the MOCKINGJAY reviews on the internet. Seriously people, can't you at least wait until after the weekend? I HATE spoilers!
Hmm... maybe that's what I can post about. Spoilers!
I always hate it when the blurb on the back of a book, or the cover image gives away the BIG SECRET in a book. Like for example, HUSH, HUSH:
The plot is based around the slow reveal that there's something strange about Patch. What could it be? Why is he always there to save Nora, even when it's impossible? What's up with those weird scars on his back?
I can't remember the exact page number, but it's probably at least halfway through the book before the truth comes out, and yet, thanks to the cover, I'm screaming at Nora from practically page one HE'S A FALLEN ANGEL!!! WATCH YOUR BACK!!! (Um, yeah, sorry if I spoiled that for you.) And I couldn't help but feel a little bad for Becca Fitzpatrick because all the masterful plotting and suspense she created lost some of it's edge because the biggest secret was right there on the cover. There was still plenty of tension, and lots to keep you hooked though. HUSH, HUSH is a great book that I highly recommend if you haven't read it yet.
This also happens with blurbs, like with TWILIGHT, whose blurb starts out with this quote from the book:
About three things I was absolutely positive:
First, Edward was a vampire.
Second, there was a part of him–and I didn’t know how dominant that part might be–that thirsted for my blood.
And third, I was unconditionally and irrevocably in love with him.
Now I don't know if the original blurb from when the book was first released in 2006 is the same, but again, it gives away a huge chunk of the mystery. TWILIGHT is over 500 pages long, and much of the opening is devoted to Why is Edward and his family so strange? It's over 100 pages before it's revealed that Edward is a vampire. 100 pages that I wanted to flip through just to get to the part where he admitted it because I already knew it was coming. Again I thought it was a shame because the buildup to that moment is done really well. I imagine that if I hadn't known, I would've found those opening pages, page-turners.
It's a trade-off I suppose. HUSH, HUSH could've gone with a more ambiguous cover. Maybe something with a mysterious cute guy with a hat pulled down low over his eyes and a sexy grin, but it wouldn't have been as eye-catching. And even though we don't learn what Patch is right off, the cover does highlight the overall subject of the story. It doesn't bother me as much as say, if the entire book had been about finding out what Patch was, and it ended with the reveal that he was an angel.
With TWILIGHT, between the totally vague and unrelated cover image and the long buildup of an even longer book, I can see why it would be important to state the hook up front, otherwise, people might not keep reading.
What are your thoughts on this? How do you feel about covers and blurbs that give too much away? Does it ruin the story for you if you've figured out the mystery the main character is still trying to put together?
Tuesday, August 24, 2010
When revising crosses the line
I decided to spend the past few weeks revising my YA ms after some awesome feedback from my crit partners, and those revisions turned into something else--a major rewrite--as in the entire last half of the book. I said I'd have it done by this Wed. and I've never missed a deadline in my life. If I'd known several weeks ago just how much sleep I'd lose and all the scenes that I'd delete and redo, I would've cried. Luckily, I didn't realize it until I was in too deep, and then I was on a mission to finish. And now--I'm done. Woo hoo! I'm doing one more final read through because I'm compulsive like that.
Have you ever started minor revisions and realized in the midst of them that you crossed the line into extensive rewrites? How did you cope? I've used a heck of a lot of chocolate ice cream and coffee this week!
Monday, August 23, 2010
Contest Monday with Halloween and zombies
Got a half-finished ms that you need to finish? Love the idea of NaNoWriMo but 50,000 is too many words or November is a bad month for you? Want to win TONS of awesome prizes? Then check out the Complete Your Draft 2010 contest! Write 25,000 words on your ms in the month of September and win prizes! Check out the link for all the info! Ends September 30th but sign up before September starts!
If you enjoy writing short stories (I don't, but I love reading them), then check out the short story contest by Matt Cunningham over at Literary Asylum. Deadline is Oct. 15th.
Know any good zombie jokes? Janice Hardy is giving away a copy of her newest book, Blue Fire, from The Healing Wars trilogy to the commenter with the best zombie joke. "Two zombies walk into a bar..." Yeah, that's all I've got so far. Enter by Aug. 30th.
Also, in non-creepy contest news, Nicole Zoltack is celebrating reaching 100 Followers with a contest. The winner gets a 3-chapter critique! Enter by Sept. 15th.
Happy Monday!
Saturday, August 21, 2010
Friday Book Recommendation!
OPEN YOUR EYES
Janie thought she knew what her future held. And she thought she'd made her peace with it. But she can't handle dragging Cabel down with her.
Then a stranger enters her life--and everything unravels. The future Janie once faced now has an ominous twist, and her choices are more dire than she'd ever thought possible. She alone must decide between the lesser of two evils. And time is running out...
He reaches toward her, his fingers black and bloody, his eyes deranged, unblinking. Janie is paralyzed. His cold hands reach around her neck, squeezing tight, tighter, until Janie has no breath left. She's unable to move, unable to think. As his grasp tightens further around Janie's neck, his face turns sickly alabaster. He strains harder and begins to shake.
Janie is dying.
She has no fight left in her.
It's over.
- Reading level: Young Adult
- Hardcover: 224 pages
- Publisher: Simon Pulse; 1 edition (February 9, 2010)
- Language: English
- ISBN-10: 1416979182
- ISBN-13: 978-1416979180
Thursday, August 19, 2010
No Farms, No Food
Wednesday, August 18, 2010
Cover Love!
And books that I thought sounded pretty good, but whose cover made them seem awesome. Like these:
Upcoming Covers I'm drooling over:
I've tried to figure out just what it is that draws me to these covers but they're all pretty diverse. I'm definitely drawn to images that are outside, and not so much to faces. I also tend to like photographs more than drawings. I like images convey a mood - preferably a darker one. And images that are striking but I'm not that good at pointing out just what it is that makes them striking!
What about you? What are you drawn to in a cover? What are some of your favorites?
Be sure to check out Lacey's guest post at Adventures In Children's Publishing today!
Tuesday, August 17, 2010
Vampires Suck
Then I saw the trailer for Vampires Suck and laughed my ass off. Say what you will about the Twilight series which I actually found immensely entertaining (the books, not the movies, which are entertaining for entirely different reasons), but you know you have it made when someone spends a truckload of money to produce a film that pokes fun of your original movie.
This trailer for Vampires Suck involves Lady Gaga and Jacob's abs, and is less than 2 minutes long. Really, what more could you ask for? Enjoy:
Monday, August 16, 2010
Contest Monday
This book is already out and on my TBR list, but Annie McElfresh is giving away the ARC of We Hear the Dead by Dianne Salerni and Picture the Dead by Adele Griffin and Lisa Brown. KRISTI'S NOTE: Any book with the word DEAD in the title scores automatic cool points, so enter this one. Contest closes: 9/9/10.
Want feedback on your first 3 chapters from a submissions editor? If you enter the contest run by Karen G. over at Coming Down the Mountain, you get that automatically! Yeah, pretty cool. If you're one of the top 3 finalists, you get the opportunity to submit your full manuscript. There's more info on her blog, so definitely check this one out. Contest closes: Sat. 8/21/10.
Other contests? Let me know in the comments and I'll add them. Happy Monday--you're one step closer to Friday!!
Thursday, August 12, 2010
Getting Ahead (of yourself).
Wednesday, August 11, 2010
Books (and other things) That Push Me To Write Better
The most recent experience I've had with this feeling isn't from a book at all. It's from
I saw Inception last week, and I left the theater with one thought in my head:
The level of ingenuity and depth of emotion in the storytelling of the film blew my mind. It really just sort of stopped me in my tracks and I thought about the plot issues I was having with my current (and what feels like, the millionth) revision and it all seemed so small and silly. I realized not just that I needed to up my game, but HOW MUCH I needed to up it. Somehow I'd slipped into playing it safe, and safe = boring and seen it before. So I took a step back and started really ripping my tiny little impersonation of a book apart and all of a sudden I was excited about revising it again!
There are other books I keep in mind when writing as touchstones. Books that when I'm in a good mood, inspire me to attempt to reach some of their greatness and on a bad day thrust me into the pit of despair as I think I will NEVER write anything that good!
Some of those books are:
The Harry Potter Series by J.K. Rowling - because Jo Rowling's world-building and heart blow my mind every time I read one of the books.
The Hunger Games & Catching Fire by Suzanne Collins - again, the world-building! The action! The emotion! Even now I get teary-eyed when I think about Rue!
Shiver by Maggie Stiefvater - I love how poetic the writing is, the emotion, the sense of place, and the way she made two narrators such complete unique characters that you always know who's talking.
Stolen by Lucy Christopher - This story is so emotionally complex and moving, it still haunts me. And the detail to setting is so good that every time I think about it, I feel like I'm in the desert of the Austrailian Outback. I can completely see a place I've never been or even seen photos of.
Before I Fall by Lauren Oliver - I love the way she makes the ordinary beautiful in this book. The actual prose is beautiful and very poetic but it's also the way Sam observes things. I also love that she made very real, three-dimensional characters who could be unlikeable at times and made me care about them.
All of these books (and SO MANY more) do things that I hope to do in my own stories and they remind me that it IS possible to do if I just keep my focus on the goal. Also, I've just realized that all of these books have made me cry! I guess that's what sticks with me. And that's what I want to do, tell stories that stick with you.
What are some books that inspire you?
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
Books that push me to be a better writer
From the back of the book:
In the Society, Officials decide. Who you love. Where you work. When you die. Cassia has always trusted their choices. It’s barely any price to pay for a long life, the perfect job, the ideal mate. So when her best friend appears on the Matching screen, Cassia knows with complete certainty that he is the one . . . until she sees another face flash for an instant before the screen fades to black. Now Cassia is faced with impossible choices: between Xander and Ky, between the only life she’s known and a path no one else has ever dared follow—between perfection and passion.
If you read or write dystopian fiction, you'll LOVE this book! Since I write YA, books as amazing as this one push me even harder to be a better writer--once I get past the initial "I suck compared to this" phase. This is one reason why I think reading is so vital to being a good writer. When you read a great book, it serves as an inspiration--you see how something works when it's done well.
What about you? What book have you read that inspired you to be a better writer?
Monday, August 9, 2010
Contest Monday!
In Which a Girl Reads is hosting a huge blogoversary contest that ends Sept. 14th. Up for grabs are books such as Clockwork Angel, The DUFF, and Mockingjay (to name a few out of the 25 amazing titles)!
BONUS: Both these contests are international!!
Any contests we missed? Post them in the comments and we'll add it ASAP! Thanks and Happy Monday! :)
Thursday, August 5, 2010
August- adjective, Inspiring reverence or admiration.
Wednesday, August 4, 2010
Inspiration and Preparation
What are you preparing for? The joy of success? Or the pain of rejection?
This reminded me of one of my favorite quotes:
Noticing a trend? PREPARE yourself to be the the writer you want to be. Whatever that means for you.
- Take a class (Write On Con is free and just a week away!).
- Read a book on writing.
- Get your work critiqued by people you trust and then listen to what they have to say.
- Visualize your name on the NYT bestseller list.
Whatever you do, don't spend hours (weeks, months!) writing your book while at the same time mentally preparing yourself for all the rejections you're going to get.
Take a moment today and ask yourself what you've been preparing for. You might be surprised. The good thing is there's still time to fix it!
Tuesday, August 3, 2010
What's Your Writing Schedule?
She's three and will officially start preschool this Fall when my oldest goes into 1st grade. She'll go two mornings per week which means I will have a grand total of 4 extra hours of writing time each week (yes, I will use it for writing and resist the urge to do laundry). 4 hours!!! This may not seem like a lot, but I cannot describe how excited I am. Don't get me wrong. I love my kiddos more than anything and will be a complete mess the first day my son is away for an entire school day, but still. I'll have writing time during daylight hours, when I'm not fighting against my need for sleep.
What's your writing schedule? Is it variable or consistent? Are you a nocturnal writer or do you prefer sunshine on your keyboard? Have you experienced the joy of unexpected writing time?
Monday, August 2, 2010
Contest Monday
Carolina Valdez Miller is having a contest with some awesome ARCs, including Matched, Firelight, and Torment among others--they all look fabulous! Get the deets here -- contest ends Aug. 8th.
21 Pages is having a major giveaway where you can win an ARC of books such as Clockwork Angel, Delirium, and Linger among others, so enter now! Deadline is Aug. 20th.
Sara McClung is giving away seven awesome ARCs (Firelight, Paranormalcy, The Replacement to name a few) in her Summer Saradise 7 contest! Contest ends August 5th.
Having a contest? Let us know and we'll add it!